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Dreams can become reality

Published: Jun 25, 2014

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FINALLY DONE.
It took me forever to draw the fuuuuuuur oh god. ;-;
I'm pretty happy of it tho !

EDIT : I tried to fix the mistakes that people pointed out in the critiques. ^-^

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Hynacynth

Jun 26, 2014

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Ah, hello there! I am a new watcher, came across this in my deviantWatch and thought this was an outstanding piece! So, I have a few things to say, not much though. Here I go!

I think that this is a fantastic visualisation, and you can tell that this is a fantasy-looking canine flying through the sky, giving it a dreamy effect. Like those dreams where you are flying, and there's rainbows, and everything feels fantastic! So, that is definitely a 5/5.

I've never seen anything like this before, so I don't have to say much on the originality. Again, 5/5.

For the technique, I do spot a couple of flaws (not very big, but enough to just point out. c<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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(Smile)"/>. Like the last critique, the face looks a bit twisted. I think you can spot, as if it is looking forward, but kind of sideways at the same time. I have this same problem, and I am trying to spot it in myself quite a bit too, so there's definitely nothing wrong with a small mistake. I don't seem to spot it in any of your other works, so this isn't much to worry about. Another flaw I can see is that, along with the flawless lineless art, the tail looks a bit choppy. That's the main thing that's bugging me about this piece. It doesn't look quite blended enough like the fur and the legs, and seems to have been done in a couple of minutes like you were finishing it quickly. Other than that, I can spot nothing else, so moving on.

The impact is outstanding. Nothing else to say on this part, so I am just going to end it here..

FANTASTIC job on this drawing, you should be very proud of yourself for this! Have a great day! c: